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Work in progress by:
psykomakia
on Oct 15 '09
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psykomakia
psykomakia on Oct 15 '09
Robots are not made of flesh like you and I, but are made from steel.

Based on my slogan, which you can vote for here.
liquorice kitten
liquorice kitten on Oct 15 '09
like the dark grey!
celandinestern
celandinestern on Oct 15 '09
mega adorable!! on dark gray pleez!!!
psykomakia
psykomakia on Oct 16 '09
Subbed but declined! lol

This is a type tee, admittedly, but the slogan isn't scoring well, so I mocked up a tee and submitted it. They declined. I just like the way this looks, so I put up this critique so that I can click it and look at all my design sexiness.

I guess I could actually work on this if there are suggestions.

I'm guessing they'll want the robot to be given some depth and color or something, but I really like how this is super simple. Oh well.
3 days later
psykomakia
psykomakia on Oct 19 '09
This slogan is still below 40% :-(
18 days later
psykomakia
psykomakia on Nov 07 '09
The slogan finally eclipsed the 40% mark! Can we get it above 50%?
ben buzzkill
ben buzzkill on Nov 07 '09
You could try making the design more illustrative but then maybe have the robot saying "I have nerves of steel" in a speech bubble or something?

I have some crits up if you wouldn't mind taking a look...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/55687/Flock_Wallpaper
http://www.threadless.com/critique/55885/Many_hands_make_light_work
http://www.threadless.com/critique/52684/Buzzkill_Caddy
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